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@@ -234,8 +234,7 @@ Cannot be used together with any of the other options 
 .It Fl m
 Create the cloned repository as a mirror of the original repository.
 This is useful if the cloned repository will not be used to store
-local changes as created by
-.Cm got commit .
+locally created commits.
 .Pp
 The repository's
 .Pa config
@@ -245,7 +244,7 @@ option enabled, such that
 .Cm got fetch
 or
 .Xr git-fetch 1
-will write incoming changes directly to local branches in the
+will write incoming changes directly to branches in the
 .Dq refs/heads/
 reference namespace, rather than to branches in the
 .Dq refs/remotes/
@@ -254,9 +253,11 @@ This avoids the usual requirement of having to run
 .Cm got rebase
 after
 .Cm got fetch
-in order to make incoming changes appear on local branches.
-But maintaining local changes in the cloned repository becomes difficult
-since local changes will be at risk of being discarded whenever incoming
+in order to make incoming changes appear on branches in the
+.Dq refs/heads/
+namespace.
+But maintaining custom changes in the cloned repository becomes difficult
+since such changes will be at risk of being discarded whenever incoming
 changes are fetched.
 .It Fl q
 Suppress progress reporting output.
@@ -325,9 +326,10 @@ By default, branch references in the
 reference namespace will be updated to point at the newly fetched commits.
 The
 .Cm got rebase
-command can then be used to make new changes visible on local branches in the
+command can then be used to make new changes visible on branches in the
 .Dq refs/heads/
-namespace, merging incoming changes with local changes as necessary.
+namespace, merging incoming changes with the changes on those branches
+as necessary.
 .Pp
 If the repository was created as a mirror with
 .Cm got clone -m
@@ -338,7 +340,7 @@ the remote repository.
 If those branches contained local commits, these commits will no longer be
 reachable via a reference and will therefore be at risk of being discarded
 by Git's garbage collector.
-Maintaining local changes in a mirror repository is therefore discouraged.
+Maintaining custom changes in a mirror repository is therefore discouraged.
 .Pp
 In any case, references in the
 .Dq refs/tags/
@@ -433,8 +435,7 @@ in which case references will be mapped directly into 
 .Dq refs/
 namespace.
 .Pp
-Once a reference has been fetched, a local branch based on it can be
-created with
+Once a reference has been fetched, a branch based on it can be created with
 .Cm got branch
 if needed.
 .Pp
@@ -754,7 +755,7 @@ is never traversed.
 .El
 .It Cm diff Oo Fl C Ar number Oc Oo Fl r Ar repository-path Oc Oo Fl s Oc Oo Fl w Oc Op Ar object1 Ar object2 | Ar path
 When invoked within a work tree with less than two arguments, display
-uncommitted changes in the work tree.
+local changes in the work tree.
 If a
 .Ar path
 is specified, only show changes within this path.
@@ -783,7 +784,7 @@ work tree, use the repository path associated with thi
 .It Fl s
 Show changes staged with
 .Cm got stage
-instead of showing local changes.
+instead of showing local changes in the work tree.
 This option is only valid when
 .Cm got diff
 is invoked in a work tree.
@@ -1087,7 +1088,7 @@ The options for
 are as follows:
 .Bl -tag -width Ds
 .It Fl f
-Perform the operation even if a file contains uncommitted modifications.
+Perform the operation even if a file contains local modifications.
 .It Fl k
 Keep affected files on disk.
 .It Fl R
@@ -1102,7 +1103,7 @@ is a directory.
 Short alias for
 .Cm remove .
 .It Cm revert Oo Fl p Oc Oo Fl F Ar response-script Oc Oo Fl R Oc Ar path ...
-Revert any uncommitted changes in files at the specified paths.
+Revert any local changes in files at the specified paths in a work tree.
 File contents will be overwritten with those contained in the
 work tree's base commit.
 There is no way to bring discarded changes back after